Reviews | Trapped In Time 11:11

TRAPPED IN TIME 11:11 is a project that's easy to fall in love with. The writer does a solid job of clearly fleshing out the world and overall setting. Character wise, it's easy to want to root for Vanessa and Will and feel invested in their story and attempts to make love work. Plot wise, it's an emotionally compelling moment when we realize that Will's father lost his soulmate very early on in life. Additionally, it's a really vulnerable and strong moment when Vanessa has to be honest with her family and tell them that she's pregnant. That scene felt very honest and real. What made matters worse, was Andy's reaction when Vanessa told him, which ultimately helps Vanessa's overall character development as it makes an audience really root for her and feel invested in what happens next for her. Additionally, the writer did a great job of making the ending feel incredibly powerful. The writer did a solid job of juxtaposing Will's love for Vanessa with the sadness he feels after having lost her. (The Black List review)

I love this feeling you've created for the audience (Screenplay consultant)

The story is amazing and there are so many strong pillars in it's foundation. Dialogue is the hardest thing to write and 90% of yours is so stellar emotionally profound. The images and scenes you've chosen are palpable with energy and feeling. (Professional Hollywood screenplay reader)

This is a touching drama with a compelling central hook. The conflict between how Will and Vanessa are able to deal with how life has affected them that provides the story with its thematic spine. Most viewers will be able to relate to the idea of correcting a wrong choice made in one's youth, and the strength of the story is how it defies the expectations of the set-up. (Script Pipeline)

I am incredibly impressed both with the writing and the depth and feeling it provokes. I found your writing to be quite realistic. (Entertainment Attorney)

Great job with the Vanessa character. One can see her slipping away. Really great job, you didn't hold back! (Professional actress, screenwriter and instructor)

Started reading a while ago and have to stop for the night. This is a page turner! Congrats (School teacher)

You are so blessed to have infinite love. Many never find a love like yours. I pray you find your love again. (Screenplay reader fan)

I love this feeling you've created for the audience! (Screenplay consultant)

Trapped In Time 11:11